"often raising her in contract to the behavior of Donald Trump" - should be "contrast".
"Ardern, with a Harvard fellowship, is leaving in the United States" - is she "living here" or "leaving the"?
"Adern shows herself a capable and engaging on-camera presence" - it feels like there should be an "as" between "herself" and "a capable".
"celebrity Brandeis professor at the time, who represented a name from the 1990s political past, Anita Hill" - the order of these clauses feels clumsy. Maybe if switched "Anita Hill" with "who represented a name..."?
"as well as Sally’s sister, Bear Ride, is a fantastic interview subject" - should add "who is" between "Bear Ride," and "is a fantastic".
This feels like it was written in a hurry, and needed an extra pass to catch these. It also reminds me that I hate both Xitter and Bluesky for not offering any kind of edit feature after you post, because I'm always finding missing or misspelt words in my own posts!
A more important typo. Ardern was PM of New Zealand, not Australia!!
You got some typos here:
"often raising her in contract to the behavior of Donald Trump" - should be "contrast".
"Ardern, with a Harvard fellowship, is leaving in the United States" - is she "living here" or "leaving the"?
"Adern shows herself a capable and engaging on-camera presence" - it feels like there should be an "as" between "herself" and "a capable".
"celebrity Brandeis professor at the time, who represented a name from the 1990s political past, Anita Hill" - the order of these clauses feels clumsy. Maybe if switched "Anita Hill" with "who represented a name..."?
"as well as Sally’s sister, Bear Ride, is a fantastic interview subject" - should add "who is" between "Bear Ride," and "is a fantastic".
This feels like it was written in a hurry, and needed an extra pass to catch these. It also reminds me that I hate both Xitter and Bluesky for not offering any kind of edit feature after you post, because I'm always finding missing or misspelt words in my own posts!
Thanks!